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31st Dec 2016, 12:00 AM
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31st Dec 2016, 12:00 AM
A few comments here. This page at least in script was two pages long, eight panels in length. I never make some thing drag out longer than it truly needs to be, so it got condensed a little. Nothing the characters say got cut, but showing actions did. That's what happens when you train yourself to do animation as well has sequential art. You think about every step that needs to be taken.

Second, a little trivia on Alan's character. I wonder if any of you realize he's a slight carry over from another character I wrote a while ago? And this is something I know you wouldn't know. Shortly before starting work on story one I re-listened to unproduced movie scripts through text-to-speech software, I had not heard in years. One was a 80's sci fi a bit far thrown from what made it to screen. Deciding Alan's name in story one wasn't easy but eventually as you know it happened. I later realized what I'd been listening to earlier might have effected my decision making. In the movie script one prominent character was named "Al". In final draft the character on screen was re-named "Tuck".