Comic 291 - Short 4: Page 16

18th Sep 2018, 12:00 AM
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18th Sep 2018, 12:00 AM
systemcat
That piece in the fourth panel wasn't originally in the script. Something I forgot to say about page 14. That shirt he is shown wearing in the last panel which he also has on for page 15. It's meant to be from the museum for Lookout peak, mentioned in the Metro City tourist brochure.

https://systemcat.deviantart.com/art/Metro-City-Tourist-Brochure-683612033

That red thing Alan is carrying around should be a little more prominent than it appears. It's an idea I have to him when he is really focusing on an engineering task, he holds / messes with a bird feather. Normally a Cardinal feather. This is a bit meaning to date back to him sitting on the airplane in the flashback story for him in Iron and Steel. Him holding the bird feather as the wheels start turning in his head.